It’s a long rolling thunder past six
as sky cries hisses where it hits
streets gleam in streetlights
trees wave leaves in windy flights
cars surf wet asphalt ways
through lightning claps and lights like day
there’s only seconds in between
flash sharp snappy boom and winking gleam
now heavens really open dam
whoosh and swoosh and almost bedlam
of sweet september falling rain right through
I wish I’s out walking in it with you
in the early dark with maybe a dog or two
we could laugh and get soaked with true
then find a fires tangled dancing form
Near open windows to the storm
Hi – Not sure who this poem is for but I found that the first line is a little corny (“dime past six” part) so it makes what is a beautiful sentiment into something sheepish.
ok, guess didn’t think the corny start would be the whole summer there. dang. so if it hangs like an oil slick corn and turkey fart in the air, better do something about it.
Reads better. I like it.